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There once was this girl.. by shasunny There once was this girl.. by shasunny
Okay. So I was just looking around music, themes and such. When I had this idea to make silly little songs. This is my first.
It's not very good TT.TT I'm sorry for any small mistakes I made. I may or may not make other ones.
This is basically a sing called There once was this girl..^^
I would like to hear what you think had happen. So please comment and tell me what you think had happen.
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TinyandHuge May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
SAD! :cries:
...Wow....I felt like;A; IT'S SO SADDD.

I THINK the girl was being abused, got fed up and jumped :T or she was an emo. YOU NEVER KNOW.
rosenthia May 16, 2013  Student General Artist
wow this is great amazing when i was reading this and i got to the part were it said she was covered in purple and blue i thought oh no the poor girls been bashed and while reading i started to think was this girl was being hurt at home but put on a mask so it didn't show so that her friends wouldn't know but in her eyes she was begging them to notice and the times she was missing could of been when she was really hurt she is always smiling but under the mask she is crying and all she asks is for someone to notice but what she didn't know was that the person who like her noticed when she thought that no one had noticed. i love this :heart: but it is very sad :(
:iconyea-plz: Whoa. Your really good at analyzing ^^ I'm glad you like it and yes. It is sad. Thank you so much for commenting, I'm very thankful XD
rosenthia May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
your welcome thank you for putting up an amazing piece of art
awwwwwwwww thats so sad :(
i think the song is great ^^
Thanks. I'm very happy you like it. The song took me ages to get right. I wanted to make something sad and this popped out. I might make more for Nero and the other Vocaloids I haven't decided. The 'girl' he's talking about can anyone, if you want too, you can have it as Rin since I know you love that couple. I made sure to advoid any features of the girl, so anyone can choose who is his first love :iconsmile-luplz:
your welcome
cool ok ^^

i also made a very small song when i was in 1st grade
but its so childish that i never sing it anymore |D
MMDCousins May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I thought that was rin for a second,
I found out it was nero at the end anyways
:iconmoesmileplz: Thank you. Hmm~ I suppose I should add that in my little comment hehe~ Yup. This is my desgin of Nero. But I'm so glad you like it. I was worried that no-one would like it. The small song took me hours to write TT.TT Anyway. I'm glad you like it. And thank you for commenting.
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